Okay, so, once again I spent ages reading through your writing, having no idea what was going on, and loving every minute of it. (PLEASE WRITE SOMETHING IN ONE OF MY FANDOMS SOON. It would probably double the awesomeness of your writing for me, or better.) Particularly the first one you linked to, because... well, I am me, and that was awesome. (Though I can't say I understand the concept of RPS in general. I just pretended they were random characters which happened to have the names of famous people, it helped.)
Anyway, v. lovely, good show, however - I agree a little bit (though not completely) with the person who commented on your punctuation and whatnot. Mostly I just think you might benefit from someone doing a read-through beforehand for errors, or just doing a more thorough one yourself. (I am available for beta-ing, if you were interested in the first option, just a heads up.) It's just that the occasional error in punctuation or a word that forgot to be deleted, while possible to understand and thereby ignore by the reader, is an unnecessary distraction.
Those are my main comments, but I would just say that I loved and enjoyed it all as always, and of course that is the most important thing. (Commas, while important, are still second in rank. Sorry, Remus Lupin.) Thank you for sharing!
Also, I am hitting Demon's Lexicon as soon as I get home. As well as every other book you have recommended (once I go back through all your posts and make a proper list of them).
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Anyway, v. lovely, good show, however - I agree a little bit (though not completely) with the person who commented on your punctuation and whatnot. Mostly I just think you might benefit from someone doing a read-through beforehand for errors, or just doing a more thorough one yourself. (I am available for beta-ing, if you were interested in the first option, just a heads up.) It's just that the occasional error in punctuation or a word that forgot to be deleted, while possible to understand and thereby ignore by the reader, is an unnecessary distraction.
Those are my main comments, but I would just say that I loved and enjoyed it all as always, and of course that is the most important thing. (Commas, while important, are still second in rank. Sorry, Remus Lupin.) Thank you for sharing!
Also, I am hitting Demon's Lexicon as soon as I get home. As well as every other book you have recommended (once I go back through all your posts and make a proper list of them).
Glad to hear summer has arrived!